Eden’s French Pantoum About Fall (best read outloud while looking at autumn leaves)

Posted in Family Tales, SFD & Arty Stuff, MiniMonks | November 21st, 2006 at 12:11 pm

seeing fall birds
eating pumpkin pie
snow (sometimes)
jumping into leaf piles

eating pumpkin pie
new clothes
jumping into leaf piles
going to school

new clothes
snow (sometimes)
going to school
seeing fall birds

by Eden Claire Mee Chapman, age 7

3 Responses to “Eden’s French Pantoum About Fall (best read outloud while looking at autumn leaves)”

  1. Timothy Says: (November 21st, 2006 at 3:25 pm)

    Nice :)

    Here’s mine:

    Morning sunrise
    Kissing her good morning
    Sharing the drive
    Evening sunset

    Kissing her good morning
    Holding her hand
    Evening sunset
    Kissing her goodnight

    Holding her hand
    Sharing the drive
    Kissing her goodnight
    Morning sunrise

    by Timothy Ray, age 53

    Peace!

  2. Susan Young Says: (November 22nd, 2006 at 11:35 pm)

    Eden, what a great poem! I’m so glad I got to read it. Reading your poem made me remember what wonderful pumpkin pie your dad makes! Love you, Susan

  3. Timothy Says: (November 25th, 2006 at 8:15 pm)

    Eden,

    Yours is so much better than mine, thank you for writing it. It has inspired me in my meditation and appreciation of Life.

    Mine was a tribute to my wife, the BonBon. She makes me smile and makes Life sing. I love her very much.

    Thank you again for your poem. It is awesome!

    Peace!

    Timothy